2nd Draft of Script - Different Ending

INT. SHOWROOM/BATHROOM - NIGHT. 6

Cut to:

Man holding a shower radio up to the woman who is still sitting in the bath, behind the screen door. The radio is playing static, ghost noise.

MAN:

It’s not quite up to the job but 

I’m hoping the gesture still 

counts?

The Woman ignores him. 

MAN: (CONT’D)

Look please don’t take it 

seriously. It was nothing. 

The woman is silent. The man walks over and sits on the 

toilet next to the bath.

MAN: (CONT’D)

Come on, can we just forget I said 

anything? We’ve had a laugh haven’t 

we? 

The woman remains unresponsive.

MAN: (CONT’D)

(Sighing)

Look, I’m trying. Give me 

something! Come on we’ll laugh 

about this one day. What a story 

to tell the kids, eh?

WOMAN:

(Sighs. To self)

We were doing so well. 

MAN:

(Laughs)

What?

The Woman begins to climb out of the bath.

WOMAN:

Oh, it’s such a pity. I had high 

hopes for this one. 

Man laughs awkwardly.

WOMAN: (CONT’D)

I thought he had it all: the looks, 

the charm... But he was just like 

all the rest. Trying to leave me.

MAN:

The fuck are you talking about?

WOMAN:

But he couldn’t, he couldn’t this 

time. Yet he still managed to ruin 

it. Mummy’s going to be so

disappointed. 

The Woman walks past him and, facing away, she pulls a key 

out of her bra.

WOMAN: (CONT’D)

Never mind, there’s always next 

time.

She crosses the showroom and reaches the main door. The Man 

soon follows. The Woman appears to be staring outside. 

Suddenly, the click of the door opening sets off an alarm, 

and the woman steps outside. The Man is confused, and rushes 

towards the door as the Woman locks it. With the alarm still 

ringing, the man is stunned and watches her walk away. 

Cut to black.

THE END.